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8:54 pm
March 20, 2013
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And im back with another track from my upcoming album which is due out in about 6 weeks!
I did all the work on this one myself, using the beat that i dropped for free a few months ago.
Enjoy a walk into the world of a disturbed mind!
If anyone else thinks they can do better, or love the beat so much they wanna drop some hot fire over it feel free to download and use the ROYALTY FREE track 100% free for use by absolutely anyone!
Whoop Whoop Novocaine, The Blue Collar King :
djscrubb10:40 am
December 24, 2015
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You bought dope lyrics to that beat! Interesting to hear how you interpreted it.
I'm More than curios to hear the full BCK!
Whoop Whoop Cabracan :
Novocaine, The Blue Collar King, djscrubb5:32 pm
March 20, 2013
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Its definitely gunna be weird. i'll tell you that much homie.
i gotta start working on cover art this week. which is hands down the most annoying bit.
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Cabracan, djscrubb11:45 pm
March 20, 2013
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For @miklo-velka because i know how much you love my music sweeheart.
Whoop Whoop Novocaine, The Blue Collar King :
djscrubb4:41 pm
January 19, 2013
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Here is my honest review.
It's mediocre.
Your lyrics sound like 300 other underground horrorcore MC's out there on the grind trying to make it.
The beat is ok, but you didn't even put in the effort to change it up an any meaningful way for the chorus.
In multiple spots you tried to stuff too many words into a bar, which forced you off beat. That shit is just amateur night.
Whoop Whoop Miklo Velka :
Novocaine, The Blue Collar King5:30 pm
March 20, 2013
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Miklo Velka said
Here is my honest review.It's mediocre.
Your lyrics sound like 300 other underground horrorcore MC's out there on the grind trying to make it.
The beat is ok, but you didn't even put in the effort to change it up an any meaningful way for the chorus.
In multiple spots you tried to stuff too many words into a bar, which forced you off beat. That shit is just amateur night.
i totally agree.
im still figuring beat making out, wont deny it. got a log way to go.
as for sounding like everyone else /shrug. if i was trying to make it i might try be a little more 'different' but im just having fun.
as for trying to jam too much into lines, thats..... yeah. its something im working on.
thanks man ^___^ i appreciate the input :) thanks for listening! cant wait for what you think of the whole album.
Whoop Whoop Novocaine, The Blue Collar King :
Miklo Velka, djscrubb6:46 am
March 10, 2016
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Liked the beat...Have not done music in years but it instantly made me look in the closet for some of my old pads.I was about to change my style up right before I stopped after the guys that were about to go all in with me left. I released a cruddy little 5 song CD locally and got to perform at a local county event and there were some hurt feelings there when I forgot to ask the event organizer if my buddies could perform also. But this small town area EVERY other idiot is trying to do music and 99% of us suck. Let me know if you ever want to re-write this or add a collabo on it.
When I used to do a little stuff (and it is NOT that good) I was a lot softer in my style pretty wannabe-ish some times R&Bish actually. I sit back today and laugh at myself often but here is the link to my old stuff I attempted to do. It is terrible and I did everything with some cheap media player and ranted beats and had absolutely ZERO skills in mixing.
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCYwTphDKpbShbHkqSwF8UFQ
By the way it is ok to say no. I am not that soft.
ALSO..As I said the beat was good and I like the flow style and feel once you evolve into your own persona more you will be fine. The whole Aussie Machete killer thing gave me a warm and fuzzy feeling. Step into my van?
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Novocaine, The Blue Collar King11:31 pm
March 20, 2013
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hahah thanks man!
im glad you liked it, as i said previously, if you wanna use the beat, you are more than welcome. wen all gotta start somewhere man. listening to thug romance right now.... yeah its pretty bad hahaha the mixing could use some work but your flow aint bad.
but you know what, as long as you like it thats all the matters.
If you ever wanna collab, hit me up. im ALWAYS down.
9:36 pm
May 23, 2016
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Novocaine, The Blue Collar King said
as for trying to jam too much into lines, thats..... yeah. its something im working on.
What you want to make sure to do is keep your syllables in multiples opf your time scale. usually since rap songs are 16 bars its a 4/4 time. You keep your syllables one a multiple of 4 setup (4,8,12,16...) then it will fit better. the smaller the multiple the slower the flow. I find that 12 is a good even flow without having to crunch. I am tongue tied so speed rapping is a challenge. I can keep up to some other artists when singing along, but as for writing i keep between 12 and 16 per line
Do what you gotta do to get what you gotta get. Just don't do it to me or come after my shit.
5:11 pm
March 20, 2013
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TurnaFraze said
Novocaine, The Blue Collar King said
as for trying to jam too much into lines, thats..... yeah. its something im working on.
What you want to make sure to do is keep your syllables in multiples opf your time scale. usually since rap songs are 16 bars its a 4/4 time. You keep your syllables one a multiple of 4 setup (4,8,12,16...) then it will fit better. the smaller the multiple the slower the flow. I find that 12 is a good even flow without having to crunch. I am tongue tied so speed rapping is a challenge. I can keep up to some other artists when singing along, but as for writing i keep between 12 and 16 per line
and this is why ill never be a great rapper..... because i understood absolutely nothing in that post.
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