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ANOTHER CHUKLZ RAP? BARS? LYRICS? (AKA EVEN MORE WACKNESS FROM CHUKLZ)
December 5, 2013
3:49 pm
Chuklz
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(UNFINISHED AS ALWAYS)

They sayin chukboy you evil and lethal

Why you talkin shit about these deceased people?

stop stabbing all the faggots in the home depo

Are you some kind of psychotic sociopath?

You claim you're smart as fuck but you can't even do freshman math

My teacher soudin like gandalf the gray YOU SHALL NOT PASS

So I just chill in class passin the gas

The hottie in front of me wearin no panties I stare at her ass

Chuklz are you a sick sexual sadist?

Nah bitch I'm just prick who's always fuckin dateless

I'm spend my weekends in the alleyway killin a bunch of rapists

Everyone sayin I'm annoying as fuck like a bed bug bite

But if they keep talkin shit imma take some lifes

I get irate cuz The airport sees me as a ruthless villain

Just because I'm an Arab I can't just be chillin

They wanna see me die a hundred times like krillan

Yeah yeah I'm an ADD Arab with a bi polar disorder

but everyone thinks I'm a Mexican who just jumped the border

They find out I'm hella mixed so they call me a mutt

But at they end of the day guess who's gonna get cut

Dissected like some frog guts

Mr. D there you go again talking about cutting and stabbing

Haven't you had enough of this nonsensical blabbing

Any more of this shit is what I'm not having

Shrinks are sayin I'm skitzophrenic

Givin me Xanax bars for the panic

But I just pop that shit off like a Russian AK

Sell them on the south side to some homeless junkies

All the pill head bitches love meh

Not

I can't even get props from a crackwhore

they'd prolly wanna be smokin some crack more

All I wanted to do is enter from the back door

Dammit chuklz stop bein so damn vulgar

You'll never get play cuz face it you look like an ogre

Fuck you hoe bitch is what I told her

Then crushed that hoe with a bolder

These skanks wanna talk too much smack

So I put hella weapons right through their rack

Then i Watch em blow like a car in Iraq

Don't even think I'm fuckin frontin either

Ask your girl what up next time you see her

Don't get mad cuz I can't control my actions

If you gettin me pissed you don't wanna see my reaction

Let just say I go hard like an erection and do murder to the upmost perfection

My brain is gone, my brain is gone, say no more my brain is gone

December 5, 2013
4:01 pm
The Notorious, L.T.B.
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It's improving. 

Blood rains down from an angry sky! My cock rages on! My cock rages on!

December 5, 2013
4:04 pm
Chuklz
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yeah i feel that way too.

I just feel like even though its gettin better it has that everlasting taste of wackness. 

I think i need to learn how to stucture my rhymes better

My brain is gone, my brain is gone, say no more my brain is gone

December 5, 2013
4:17 pm
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Im not an expert, and im often told i have poor taste and am too easy to impress. So dont take my advice too much to heart. But at least it doesnt sound like a drunk and pissed dr. seuss wrote it this time.

Blood rains down from an angry sky! My cock rages on! My cock rages on!

December 5, 2013
4:19 pm
Chuklz
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LTB said
Im not an expert, and im often told i have poor taste and am too easy to impress. So dont take my advice too much to heart. But at least it doesnt sound like a drunk and pissed dr. seuss wrote it this time.

lol thats the nicest thing anyones eve said to me

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December 5, 2013
5:31 pm
Chuklz
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Chuklz said

LTB said
Im not an expert, and im often told i have poor taste and am too easy to impress. So dont take my advice too much to heart. But at least it doesnt sound like a drunk and pissed dr. seuss wrote it this time.

lol thats the nicest thing anyones eve said to me

sarcasm

 

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December 5, 2013
6:15 pm
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Chuklz said
(UNFINISHED AS ALWAYS)

They sayin chukboy you evil and lethal

Why you talkin shit about these deceased people?

stop stabbing all the faggots in the home depo

Are you some kind of psychotic sociopath?

You claim you're smart as fuck but you can't even do freshman math

X_X

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December 5, 2013
6:18 pm
Chuklz
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The Warlock said

Chuklz said
(UNFINISHED AS ALWAYS)

They sayin chukboy you evil and lethal

Why you talkin shit about these deceased people?

stop stabbing all the faggots in the home depo

Are you some kind of psychotic sociopath?

You claim you're smart as fuck but you can't even do freshman math

X_X

is that goo or bad?

My brain is gone, my brain is gone, say no more my brain is gone

December 5, 2013
6:24 pm
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depends on what you were going for.. as in if you wrote that in seriousness or satire..

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December 5, 2013
6:30 pm
Chuklz
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The Warlock said
depends on what you were going for.. as in if you wrote that in seriousness or satire..

satire of course. this whole song is a horror/humor

If i were recording this the third person would oof been like a theripist/ other voice

and fuck i just had another panic attack>>>>>>>>>>>

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December 5, 2013
6:50 pm
Chuklz
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The Warlock said
depends on what you were going for.. as in if you wrote that in seriousness or satire..

coolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcool to fresh tho

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December 5, 2013
10:52 pm
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Plz dont feed the duckalos

December 6, 2013
5:11 pm
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Can a mod go to the first post in this thread and change unfinished to shitty so anyone who reads has proper warning before they choose to do so.  

"Somewhere theres a Waffle House thats severely understaffed right now" -OCJ to Scruffy watching a second stage act at the Gathering.

December 6, 2013
5:24 pm
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OCJ_Brendan said
Can a mod go to the first post in this thread and change unfinished to shitty so anyone who reads has proper warning before they choose to do so.  

not i.  good enough warning in the title.  

 

weighing in...  im not gonna comment on the quality of the poem, because i dont really know if its any good, i just kinda skimmed it.  

  

  awfully paranoid, arent you?   

December 6, 2013
6:50 pm
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D- The way you switch between tenses is one of the more annoying qualities to your want-to-bes. I say one of because there are plenty of things you need to work on before you even think of actually rapping and graduating to full blown poseur. To be honest your lyrics scream low self esteem, I imagine you are using this as a way to feel better about yourself. Plus, your horrible. Other than that it pretty much sucked.

December 6, 2013
6:57 pm
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Your poems should be used to torture the worst criminals in the world they can only read ur poems all day

December 6, 2013
7:18 pm
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Guest said
D- The way you switch between tenses is one of the more annoying qualities to your want-to-bes. I say one of because there are plenty of things you need to work on before you even think of actually rapping and graduating to full blown poseur. To be honest your lyrics scream low self esteem, I imagine you are using this as a way to feel better about yourself. Plus, your horrible. Other than that it pretty much sucked.

raw, but funny.  

  

  awfully paranoid, arent you?   

December 6, 2013
8:16 pm
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It doesn't suck as much as some people say it does, it needs work though.

 

I did like the "shall not pass" line though, regardless of how over used that joke is.

 

Plus, I'm sorry, but anybody who considers them self to be a hardcore ICP fan has no right to say some of the shit some people say on here.

 

"I climbed up a tree, guy/I came back down, I don't know why"

 

Yeah...

Guest said
D- The way you switch between tenses is one of the more annoying qualities to your want-to-bes.

I disagree.

I say one of because there are plenty of things you need to work on before you even think of actually rapping and graduating to full blown poseur.

Just some hater bullshit.

To be honest your lyrics scream low self esteem, I imagine you are using this as a way to feel better about yourself. Plus, your horrible. Other than that it pretty much sucked.

You listen to fucking ICP. Remember that. His shit reminds me of some fucking OG ICP, you're just talking shit.

 

December 9, 2013
2:02 pm
Chuklz
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I was kinda aiming for that old school clowns sound.
TO ME, this is the shizzle so fuck yall deniers

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December 10, 2013
2:13 pm
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Chuklz said
I was kinda aiming for that old school clowns sound.
TO ME, this is the shizzle so fuck yall deniers

^^This gets you props.  Not the old school clowns sound, but the confidence part.

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