OCJ_Brendan said

Chuklz said
I was kinda aiming for that old school clowns sound.
TO ME, this is the shizzle so fuck yall deniers

^^This gets you props.  Not the old school clowns sound, but the confidence part.

thanks fam! I really appreciate it

Chuklz said
I was kinda aiming for that old school clowns sound.
TO ME, this is the shizzle so fuck yall deniers

^^This gets you props.  Not the old school clowns sound, but the confidence part.

I did like the "shall not pass" line though, regardless of how over used that joke is.

Plus, I'm sorry, but anybody who considers them self to be a hardcore ICP fan has no right to say some of the shit some people say on here.

"I climbed up a tree, guy/I came back down, I don't know why"

Yeah...

Guest said
D- The way you switch between tenses is one of the more annoying qualities to your want-to-bes.

I disagree.

I say one of because there are plenty of things you need to work on before you even think of actually rapping and graduating to full blown poseur.

Just some hater bullshit.

To be honest your lyrics scream low self esteem, I imagine you are using this as a way to feel better about yourself. Plus, your horrible. Other than that it pretty much sucked.

You listen to fucking ICP. Remember that. His shit reminds me of some fucking OG ICP, you're just talking shit.

Guest said
D- The way you switch between tenses is one of the more annoying qualities to your want-to-bes. I say one of because there are plenty of things you need to work on before you even think of actually rapping and graduating to full blown poseur. To be honest your lyrics scream low self esteem, I imagine you are using this as a way to feel better about yourself. Plus, your horrible. Other than that it pretty much sucked.

raw, but funny.  

OCJ_Brendan said
Can a mod go to the first post in this thread and change unfinished to shitty so anyone who reads has proper warning before they choose to do so.  

not i.  good enough warning in the title.  

weighing in...  im not gonna comment on the quality of the poem, because i dont really know if its any good, i just kinda skimmed it.  

The Warlock said
depends on what you were going for.. as in if you wrote that in seriousness or satire..

 to fresh tho

The Warlock said
depends on what you were going for.. as in if you wrote that in seriousness or satire..

satire of course. this whole song is a horror/humor

If i were recording this the third person would oof been like a theripist/ other voice

and fuck i just had another panic attack>>>>>>>>>>>

The Warlock said

Chuklz said
(UNFINISHED AS ALWAYS)

They sayin chukboy you evil and lethal

Why you talkin shit about these deceased people?

stop stabbing all the faggots in the home depo

Are you some kind of psychotic sociopath?

You claim you're smart as fuck but you can't even do freshman math

X_X

is that goo or bad?

Chuklz said
(UNFINISHED AS ALWAYS)

They sayin chukboy you evil and lethal

Why you talkin shit about these deceased people?

stop stabbing all the faggots in the home depo

Are you some kind of psychotic sociopath?

You claim you're smart as fuck but you can't even do freshman math

X_X