iLLtheClown said:

That's some good shit. All I can say is take some notes on how like lucem & scruffy posted and when a new bar starts start it on a new line.

hey look theres a nice way of putting it! good job

I thought we were going to spit bars in this thread and not bricker about past grudges...

No need to apologize my man... Ima set up a four bar weapon battle thread tomorrow and see if we can get something soild rolling

I can't hate on no one but myself.

I am nothing
So burry me beneath your success
drowning in antother failed attempt.
resented and denied, inside I'm hollow
following my failures only to fuck up again
and in the end, I'm left empty
asking a lord who doesn't listen why he sent me
suffer through another eventless day
only to repeat the process
I speak only to myself as I lay
and it's getting harder to count the losses
is it enough to just live? I'm not convinced
but it feels selfish to ask for anything more
I've never given all there is to give
and I deserve nothing in return
tired and sore, I push away all ambitions
swallow any pride and wallow in self loathing
that I mask behind a painted smile
it works only for a while, then the laughter shatters
and my facade lays in piles at me feet
I tred upon the shards, ripping through my sole
so I dig down deeper, a hole is never whole
without a body to fill it. Still, it's a grave situation
I find myself in. If life is a game, why is it I never win?
There's no need to tally my sins, I plead no contest
I'll save you all the trouble and lay myself to rest.

I'd probably agree. 'Cause I can't rap.