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8:58 pm
March 31, 2012
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I approach songs differently.. Lucid Dream is one of a very few where I used a monotone delivery..
I've been yelling a lot lately.. sometime's i just rap in a high pitch or low pitch.. it depends on the song.. I dont know any other rappers with such a wide range..
im sure youre mistaking the relatable lines for the deep ones.. 'cause you're well..
8:59 pm
May 9, 2014
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Ohhhh review me next @Iris The Tranny juggalette
"Your girl fucked me 'cause you cummin' quicker than FedEx Air"- Sean Law
9:12 pm
March 31, 2012
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Also, I dont get the acid rap reference..
I think the Eminem & ICP influence is just as apparent if not more-so.. then again, Em was claiming to be acid rap on his 1st 2 LP's & ICP stated they wanted to make Detroit home of the acid/wicked style but still..
9:14 pm
May 9, 2014
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“I ain’t Acid Rap but I rap on acid”- Em
A clear jab towards Acid Rap.
"Your girl fucked me 'cause you cummin' quicker than FedEx Air"- Sean Law
9:15 pm
February 16, 2018
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The Warlock said
dont know any other rappers with such a wide range..
Yeah, I can't think of a single one
My entire point with bringing lucid dreams up was that it was a style outside of your range, and that it exceedingly obvious to everyone but you. And it's pretty apparent why, you're convinced you can do any style.
The Warlock said
im sure youre mistaking the relatable lines for the deep ones.. 'cause you're well..
I didn't use the word deep, you did, I said self important, the whole "relatable thing" is just another form of that, the "I think everyone can really relate to these lyrics" you gotta DO SOMETHING WITH IT just saying "thing is thing" is vapid. You need to either explain why or make them FEEL why.
If you have a trump card to show off your skill, firstly it'll balance out if I just look for your worst tracks, but if you do, feel free to defend yourself.
I see no difference between a corpse and a sex toy
9:21 pm
August 23, 2014
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Warlock and spange should start a group together.
The dunning-krugar klique.
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9:31 pm
March 31, 2012
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My entire point with bringing lucid dreams up was that it was a style outside of your range, and that it exceedingly obvious to everyone but you. And it’s pretty apparent why, you’re convinced you can do any style.
huh? Bitch i just admitted it was one of the few songs i did in that style..(it's actually the very 1st one) how wouldn't it be apparent.. it says it in the video description..
Iris The Tranny juggalette said
I didn't use the word deep, you did, I said self important, the whole "relatable thing" is just another form of that, the "I think everyone can really relate to these lyrics" you gotta DO SOMETHING WITH IT just saying "thing is thing" is vapid. You need to either explain why or make them FEEL why.
If you have a trump card to show off your skill, firstly it'll balance out if I just look for your worst tracks, but if you do, feel free to defend yourself.
that Lucid Dream song is a feeling to me.. it's obvious, rappin about mental health often is a niche.. im not sure what you want me to trump.. self importance can be applied to just about every rapper with self esteem..
i feel if it's a recent song, post 2018, there's plenty skill displayed..
9:32 pm
February 16, 2018
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The Warlock said
JiffyLong said
So have you posted any music iris?shes only posted lyrics but some how she knows whats it takes to make a "masterpiece"
& THAT shit sounded like some generic juggalo rap.. this bitch.. you a frozen pizza..
I posted horrorcore lyrics because this is a HORRORCORE FORUM.
Most of my songs currently I have written are metal songs, because, at the moment, I'm looking into starting a METAL BAND, currently with the people I'm in contact with it's shaping up to be a thrash band, and I MIGHT be able to do some rapping in it if I can get the band to go along with it, that's the game.
And I don't make anything resembling the same kind of music as tech or immortal or any of the people I've said have made "masterpieces". I am an angry fucking person, always, so I make angry fucking music. The only time I attempted to wright some sort of commentary, I was in a fucking holding cell writing what first came to my mind hyped up off pure adrenaline.
I'm focusing on a band right now, because, yeah, I'm a metal musician, I'll post some music when I actually have something to show. And last I checked you're like twice as old as me, you've had shit loads of time to make music, I'm still in high school (got a month left) I got cheated out of all the money I was supposed to earn, and the only equipment I have are decades old and belonged to a Jazz musician.
Your gonna try to talk about some horror lyrics I wrote like a year ago when I was on a sedative strong enough to kill a fucking elephant while you have fully finished songs with somehow even less substance.
Whoop Whoop Iris The Tranny juggalette :
jiggles the clownI see no difference between a corpse and a sex toy
9:35 pm
February 16, 2018
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huh? Bitch i just admitted it was one of the few songs i did in that style..(it’s actually the very 1st one) how wouldn’t it be apparent.. it says it in the video description..
I didn't say you were pretending it was the same style??? How the fuck is that what you thought, I was saying that you claimed to have a huge range, but that was CLEARLY OUTSIDE YOUR STYLISTIC RANGE, you couldn't do it, it sounded like shit.
Whoop Whoop Iris The Tranny juggalette :
jiggles the clownI see no difference between a corpse and a sex toy
9:36 pm
March 31, 2012
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JiffyLong said
“I ain’t Acid Rap but I rap on acid”- EmA clear jab towards Acid Rap.
idk..
Yo, I used to be too heavy in that cruising Gratiot crap
I think I fucked my head up listenin' to acid rap
that sounds more like a diss but i dont think theyre props.. especially considering the actual disses aimed towards cage, canibus, & ICP
and of course the ozzy/manson line is stating clear influence
9:39 pm
March 31, 2012
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Iris The Tranny juggalette said
huh? Bitch i just admitted it was one of the few songs i did in that style..(it’s actually the very 1st one) how wouldn’t it be apparent.. it says it in the video description..
I didn't say you were pretending it was the same style??? How the fuck is that what you thought, I was saying that you claimed to have a huge range, but that was CLEARLY OUTSIDE YOUR STYLISTIC RANGE, you couldn't do it, it sounded like shit.
lol.. well, i disagree so i didnt see your point.. i've gotten more good reviews than bad ones with that song, so it's cool if you feel that way..
and yeah J is one of few rappers with a wide range.. name 2 others..
9:41 pm
March 31, 2012
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Iris The Tranny juggalette said
Your gonna try to talk about some horror lyrics I wrote like a year ago when I was on a sedative strong enough to kill a fucking elephant while you have fully finished songs with somehow even less substance.
lol please quote the substance in it.. before down talkin my MUSIC, hoe...
9:42 pm
March 31, 2012
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jiggles the clown said
Warlock and spange should start a group together.
The dunning-krugar klique.
how am i generic you little faggot??
9:45 pm
August 23, 2014
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The Warlock said
how am i generic you little faggot??
Wow. Insults as generic and impotent as your music.
quote me to trigger a Canadian child molester
9:49 pm
March 31, 2012
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jiggles the clown said
The Warlock said
how am i generic you little faggot??
Wow. Insults as generic and impotent as your music.
exactly.. zero explanation.. must be a hater..
9:53 pm
August 23, 2014
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The Warlock said
exactly.. zero explanation.. must be a hater..
Yeah. I hate shitty generic rap.
Theres no point in giving you a detailed, well thought out analysis of why your musis is shit. Youre not worth my time and even if i did. You would ignore it. Make excuses. Say its not true. You wouldnt learn anything from it.
So you want ME to put in effort? Give me five reasons why i fucking should.
Dunning-krugar ass wack rappers.
quote me to trigger a Canadian child molester
9:56 pm
March 31, 2012
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pffft.. okay.. deep down you know your favorite rappers pen game isnt as good as mine..
9:56 pm
February 16, 2018
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JiffyLong said
Ohhhh review me next @Iris The Tranny juggalette
Honestly, I liked it, your delivery has defined personality that matches your lyrics really well, and the lyrics themselves are pretty good, I'd need to spend way more time to address which could be made better, but they have a lot of character and feel right for the beat and delivery, I'd recommend adding some variety, the vocal variety itself is perfectly fine (and for anyone reading that out of context, vocal variety within one rap song is a VERY SUBTLE thing, just in case that wasn't obvious to everyone, unless you actually want to move between styles) but what I mean by variety is, the whole song the beat is more or less unbroken, which is common, but because of everything out there, it's become more and more expected that you have some kind of change throughout. The change itself can whatever you want essentially, I could list specific ones that would work but, yet again, I don't got the time, but it's just something to think about, variety, even just for a little bit, strengthens the whole of the song.
Besides that, I'd just continue working on that delivery, it is good, but it could be more distinct (I mean, that's kind of always the game, just constantly trying to improve delivery).
So yeah, that, sorry if you were expecting me to attack it, but there wasn't any glaring issues that bothered me, to critique it more would take a lot of time.
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9:58 pm
August 23, 2014
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The Warlock said
pffft.. okay.. deep down you know your favorite rappers pen game isnt as good as mine..
Yeah. Exactly.
And dont think i didnt notice you moving the goal posts on iris too.
"I dont know any other rappers with such a wide range.."
"Oh, J is one of the few...uhhh...NOW NAME TWO MORE!!. oh yeah. Im so right. And clever..."
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10:11 pm
March 31, 2012
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jiggles the clown said
Yeah. Exactly.
And dont think i didnt notice you moving the goal posts on iris too.
"I dont know any other rappers with such a wide range.."
"Oh, J is one of the few...uhhh...NOW NAME TWO MORE!!. oh yeah. Im so right. And clever..."
LOL.. J came to mind when I typed the 1st post & i feel I have more range.. he cant do everything he used to in the 90's, we all know that..
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