track is dope like  the bars sound good but I think the track needs work, i can hear in my head how it would sound if you mastered it and added some background/adlibs that bring more emphasis to some of the words, then maybe some effects or whatever. personally I think you should take it to somebody to work with it, master it and everything because I can hear dopeness in it, just the quality is off in my opinion. 

Skeddy KruegerZ said
track is dope like  the bars sound good but I think the track needs work, i can hear in my head how it would sound if you mastered it and added some background/adlibs that bring more emphasis to some of the words, then maybe some effects or whatever. personally I think you should take it to somebody to work with it, master it and everything because I can hear dopeness in it, just the quality is off in my opinion.   

cant agree more.

scruffy said
yall dont hear it, huh? 

i heard it.   

perhaps if i knew what you were hearing..... you might be hearing pink elephants fuck each other. and i dont hear that. if that is what your hearing you should stop huffing petrol. does whacky stuff to your brain.