The Warlock said
haha i feel what youre sayin really tho i wasnt forcing to get the words out in this song tho.. like sometimes after ive spit 12-18 bars i get winded & im forcin the words out & they dont sound as clear but that really didnt happen in this song cuz of how i chopped up the multiple takes.. so yeah personally i think thats just a misperception youre having especially if its sounding “forced” right out the gate with the 1st 2-4 bars.. like i realize im takin allot of breaths through-out the song but my brain’s just programmed to constantly breathe between lines so i dont start forcin it out.. even if i dont need air i just do it out of habit haha which is why the breaths fluctuate from barely noticeable to extremely haha maybe im still missin what you mean tho idk haha

i wouldnt call it a misperception, because i know what i heard. its just how it sounds to me. maybe its only me hearing it though. all in the name of constructive criticsm.

You run out of breath, your voice starts sounding weaker. Take breaths between bars and don’t try to go too long with out taking a breath. Only take breaths between bars unless the breath in the middle of the bar goes with the flow and or adds emotional effect.

Try to take a breath after each bar unless you think you can make two bars with out a breath which is usually how it’s done when chopping.

The Warlock said
haha maybe thats the wrong word.. im curious tho is it sounding forced right out the gate with the 1st 2 bars? 

& i appreciate the constructive criticism especially the attempt of describing it as oppose to just stating it haha

i like your music, kinda. i mean i can have a lsiten when im playing games n shit but it doesnt make it to my ipod (im really anal about what goes onto my ipod, ive only got like 2000 songs at any given time). and i like to give my opinion if you didnt notice hahahah..

for sure. i still got you anecdotes album flaoting around on my pc somewhere ahahah

The Warlock said
im better off flipping them burgers huh haha.. what a hack

Fun fact, no flipping of burgers actually happens anymore, the soul of fast food has been taken away and replaced with machines in the major chains, though if you are better off flipping them, try a small mom and pop deal. Or steak and shake, though that isn’t “fast” food to me

dont have these in cali…looks bomb..

Violentdope said

dont have these in cali…looks bomb..

Food-wise, you don’t know what you’re missing. But their whole “it’s not fast food, it’s quality food made fast” slogan is only have true. I waited twenty fucking minutes in drive-thru for three shakes.