thanks for the shout out jordan fucking griffin. im giving the computer screen the finger now just fyi.

cool song though. well done homie.

JiffyLong said
Well I gave you a shoutout in another song………………….bitch

But glad you liked it. I made the beat this time, and I don’t think it turned out too bad. Good to hear other people think the same. 

yeah…. my own song. i dont think that counts lol.

and ill get around to finishing that song soon too…. maybe. hopefully.

ive been so fucking slammed lately, and ive just come up with a assessment in my study where i have to lead a team project so im working on a little EP with my homie i used to rap with 10 years ago. its gunna be violent. like really violent. 

ooops, that was meant to be a secret.

yeah prolli coulda done without the toothbrush. i mean are you trying to rub the cum into your teeth or something?

zing!

Jiffy!  Dude nice beat homie.

Just one thing….Try and be just a little smooooooother with that flow. Its very word choppy, make your words slide into one-another more smoothly, and try some adlibs to fill in the gaps.  I know it just takes practice….but try and slow down and just relax with the flow homie and you’ll be straight!  The lyrics are there man!  

yeah man, just a little more practice with that flow and you’ll be there in no time man!  and once you figure our that formula that works for ya just roll with it!

As basic as it is, for me, I rap the same rhyme word every 4 bars and it (mostly) comes out pretty nice.  I’ve been doing that for EVER!  Sometimes a change it up, but for the most part that’s my go-to!

and it never hurts to let out some aggression out on the mic too, fuckin feels great dude.  Ill be sweatin my ass off when im recording….just puttin my all in a verse or a hook or whatever it is…