Hey man overall it’s pretty dope. You have some really nice rhymes and a good flow, nice work on that. If you’re looking for constructive criticisms, here are a couple of thoughts:

-The verse lyrics and flow are great, but I feel you could be a bit more energetic with the delivery. If not that, then maybe some overdubs and ad libs might punch it up a bit. 

-The background vocal during the chorus is a little distracting (the part that says something like “There’s no way…the world’s gone cold…etc.). I really like the main vocal, you have nice energy and delivery, so that other track could stand to be turned down or even considered to be taken out and put on its own somewhere else. 

But again, those are pretty nit-picky type of criticisms. I like it over all fo sho