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August 14, 2013
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If time was all we had who would you spend it with. Would you be happy or would you enter bliss. For who makes the rules. 'Life' life can be crewel. Life can make you shine. But at night I. Wonder is life truely mine. Or does it belong to the ones you spend it with. Or is it that you share it. To become emersed in the gravity of the yesterdays. Or to be free with the promise of tomorow deep inside you will find the. The answer to the question. Is it your time or your presencse the versitility of your choice can be optimistic but how you spend your time is how you love another.
4:24 pm
August 27, 2012
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Keep doing it if you love doing it. That is my honest thought. also Cruel is not spelled crewel...that is yarn i think.
"Somewhere theres a Waffle House thats severely understaffed right now" -OCJ to Scruffy watching a second stage act at the Gathering.
4:44 pm
August 14, 2013
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I can't spell worth a fuck always been my week spot homie
5:41 pm
March 31, 2012
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OCJ_Brendan said
Keep doing it if you love doing it.
cosign
6:22 pm
March 20, 2013
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The Warlock said
OCJ_Brendan said
Keep doing it if you love doing it.cosign
cosgin also.
i dug it. love a good bit of poetry.
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August 12, 2012
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novocaine said
The Warlock said
OCJ_Brendan said
Keep doing it if you love doing it.cosign
cosgin also.
i dug it. love a good bit of poetry.
I cosign your cosign of the original cosign
7:56 pm
August 27, 2012
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Dyland said
I can't spell worth a fuck always been my week spot homie
Spell check can help alot, but look out for homonyms. Small potatos in the grand scheme of things. Do what you love and it will show in the final product....fuck the haters I mean look at Warlock...everyone hates on him and he still doing his thing.
"Somewhere theres a Waffle House thats severely understaffed right now" -OCJ to Scruffy watching a second stage act at the Gathering.
8:18 pm
March 31, 2012
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OCJ_Brendan said
fuck the haters I mean look at Warlock...everyone hates on him and he still doing his thing.
mostly everyone on here.. outside of this website tho i actually get some love once in a while haha
8:23 pm
August 27, 2012
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The Warlock said
OCJ_Brendan said
fuck the haters I mean look at Warlock...everyone hates on him and he still doing his thing.
mostly everyone on here.. outside of this website tho i actually get some love once in a while haha
Autism blogs don't count...They think you trying is "great" sorry I had to.
"Somewhere theres a Waffle House thats severely understaffed right now" -OCJ to Scruffy watching a second stage act at the Gathering.
8:24 pm
August 14, 2013
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Word um what's your shit I ain't a hater
8:32 pm
March 31, 2012
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9:26 pm
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August 12, 2012
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OCJ_Brendan said
The Warlock said
OCJ_Brendan said
fuck the haters I mean look at Warlock...everyone hates on him and he still doing his thing.
mostly everyone on here.. outside of this website tho i actually get some love once in a while haha
Autism blogs don't count...They think you trying is "great" sorry I had to.
9:33 pm
March 30, 2013
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Autism blogs?? Is that why you dig the Aspergers Boys so deeply?
Haha sorry Warlock, if I see an opening, I just go for it. Like a sexual deviant.
9:46 pm
January 16, 2013
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if it's your thing, keep it up. just remember this...spell check is your friend.
9:50 pm
January 16, 2013
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I am writing a novel right now. I would like to see more juggalos producing more of the arts. Not everyone can be a rapper. Write, draw, paint, make movies, whatever. Stick to your thing if you are good at it. Work it like a full time job. In the age of the internet you have the means to promote anything you come up with. I will be putting my novel on amazon when it's finished.
11:54 pm
August 14, 2013
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I want to make a book I just have a busy ass life
2:03 am
August 27, 2012
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Old Mr Dangerous said
Haha sorry Warlock, if I see an opening, I just go for it. Like a sexual deviant.
I have the same issue...man I wish I hadn't wandered upon Betty White taking a shower at the beach...no cold shower could wash that memory out...
Hairypoppabear said
if it's your thing, keep it up. just remember this…spell check is your friend.
Spell Check does fuck all for homonyms...Frankly I except more from someone with an olderhairygayman pseudonym.
"Somewhere theres a Waffle House thats severely understaffed right now" -OCJ to Scruffy watching a second stage act at the Gathering.
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August 6, 2013
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hairypoppabear said
I am writing a novel right now. I would like to see more juggalos producing more of the arts. Not everyone can be a rapper. Write, draw, paint, make movies, whatever. Stick to your thing if you are good at it. Work it like a full time job. In the age of the internet you have the means to promote anything you come up with. I will be putting my novel on amazon when it's finished.
It is on my bucket list to write a novel.
Yes I have a bucket list.
Bucket List is a fucking awesome movie. And to be 100% honest with you all, the ONLY movie I have actually cried while watching, in theater or otherwise. I was crying like a little bitch right next to my best friends. I thought they were gonna make fun of me just to see they were crying like a bunch of little bitches too.
1:22 am
July 26, 2013
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That just looks like I had a stroke
4:06 pm
May 28, 2013
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What you have to say is dope and easily relatable, I enjoyed it. The only thing I would say to you is that, if you spelling and grammar aren't a strong point for you, you should either spit them as lyrics/slam poetry/etc, or have an editor who helps you use grammar to your advantage to allow you to properly express what you're going for.
Your pauses, repetition and so on are well done and effective, but proper grammar would make it much more easily digested by a wider audience. Spelling is a little less important. Spelling will keep pretentious people from taking you seriously, but grammar will actually hamper your message.
Here's what I would do if I were your editor -
If time was all we had;
Who would you spend it with? Would you be happy, or would it be hell
Who makes the rules?
Life;
life can be cruel. Life can make you shine.
But at night I
Wonder
"Is life truly mine?
...or does it belong to the ones I spend it with
or...
do both of us share it?"
Becoming immersed in the gravity of the yesterdays
free with the promise of tommorow, deep inside
You will find The
The answer to the question.
Is it your time or your presence?
The versatility of your choice can be astounding
but your time is best spent
when you love another.
(dunno why the font got bigger on the last line, it wasn't on purpose)
and I'd send you that and see how you felt about it, maybe do another couple drafts and come with a final product.
You obviously have a lot to say though man and if you feel good when you write, absolutely keep on it. You only get better as you go, and you're already on your way so don't quit now.
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