aww shit. been waitin to hear some new sicc se7en. good job dude

how’d i know scruffy’s post would be talkin about me?? so predictable.. & im pretty sure pat said that about my prom picture.. in which i was totally dressed normal haha.. (sarcasm for da slow)

but yeah lets please not derail my man Se7en’s thread tho.. @sicc lookin forward to hearin’ more of your new shit fam!

to me its do what you wanna do & what your comfortable with… personally i dont think investing time in appearance hinders.. if anything it just helps spark creativity in me.. that shit should def take the backseat to talent but since i feel my man sicc already gots that covered i feel he should also focus on another aspect…

SICCSE7EN said
idgaf if you guys derail the thread that puts it at the top longer and I spent way too much time on this less than average video to only get 140 views on it, so there longer this is at the top of the underground the better it is for me.

haha very true

Yo ninja, first I give you props for taking the time to record the song. Also unlike many other unknown young rappers you also made a video, good job points for that. Now here comes the constructive criticism-

-You have flow as a rapper but I didn’t sense much emotion coming through on the track, wanted more passion/fire in your delivery

-Your main skill as a rhymer so far seems to be speed rapping in spots, don’t blow your wad too early in the song with that, set listeners up and then smack them with it midway

-Again props for filming a video but the still cam shots in the alley make it painfully obvious you couldn’t find at least one other ninja to hold the camera and film you proper. Hustle a little harder next time and find a homie you can trust with your camera to help you make the next video. At least you didn’t film yourself rapping to the camera while sitting on the couch, which I’ve seen more than one ninja do

-Warlock is right, if you’re serious about this shit you should develop a look/gimmick. Like Stone Cold Steve Austin said about the success of his merch, you have to think about what kids out there would think is cool, and why they would want to rep your shit on a T-shirt.

SICCSE7EN said
I’ve just been pushing this video to everyone I can and I have 7 likes, I need it to be posted somewhere more high traffic :(

Yo ninja there is plenty of traffic in this forum. Some of the threads up in here end up with thousands of views. At the end of the day in this social media age we now live in, if your video is TRULY DOPE it will get shared/liked/ linked to a lot. You admitted yourself you are in practice mode right now. Same reason AMB doesn’t wanted to release all their early shit in a box set like they once promised. They look back at it as their practice time. If you want brutal honesty man I’d give your song/video about a 3/10 and wouldn’t like it on youtube or recommend it to anyone. I watched it and put up a post about it because I respected your effort/hustle of filming an actual video for your track, and you said you wanted feedback. You have potential though man so keep it up. If it was easy to make a hit rap song we’d all do it

thanks faggot