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August 25, 2014
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Lost Society

Looking for some feedback on some rough mixes of songs, thanks for the help.

August 26, 2014
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are you sure?  

  

  awfully paranoid, arent you?   

August 26, 2014
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Feedback, then never Be back

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August 26, 2014
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yeah I'm sure, I'm curious as to how bad people think it is and where work needs to be done. In no way do I think this is perfect or even close but this is what we have so I want to know where to go from here.

August 27, 2014
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better than the warlock, but not by enough.  

  

to be more specific, id have to listen again, and im not likely to squeeze in time to listen again soon.  

  

  awfully paranoid, arent you?   

September 4, 2014
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jdubbya87 said
Lost Society

Looking for some feedback on some rough mixes of songs, thanks for the help.

I like it, man. Especially if you say they're rough mixes. The vocals are clear and each song seems to have a cohesive concept, unlike a lot of underground rap these days haha. Hooks seem dope, too! 

September 4, 2014
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not making a good start here new dude

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September 6, 2014
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So overall most ya'll think its awful. Now is it because of both of us? Flow just terrible? Horrible topics? Shitty Quality? I know there are a few issues but i'm trying to see what you'd suggest working. I liked that video response too haha

September 6, 2014
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What exactly are you looking to gain from feedback? Is feedback going to change anything about your music?  

September 6, 2014
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More cowbell.

September 6, 2014
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jdubbya87 said
So overall most ya'll think its awful. Now is it because of both of us? Flow just terrible? Horrible topics? Shitty Quality? I know there are a few issues but i'm trying to see what you'd suggest working. I liked that video response too haha

D) all of the above

September 7, 2014
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I'll definitely add more cow bell ha, na I'm just trying to see the area's we need to work on thats how feedback will help all of the above is helpful cuz the one guy has little to no flow (a news caster reading as one person has told me), very basic lyrics, and no presence, I need to work on my voice, breath control, and vocal volumes are things i've been told. 

September 7, 2014
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utilizing someones feedback will not make wat you do your own. make wat you think sounds good. if it sucks, then it sucks. just listen to it and see wat YOU can think will help it. you will not be dope your first time around. practice.

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September 7, 2014
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Sean Law said
utilizing someones feedback will not make wat you do your own. make wat you think sounds good. if it sucks, then it sucks. just listen to it and see wat YOU can think will help it. you will not be dope your first time around. practice.

in scruffy voice "there it is"

Practice makes perfect

September 7, 2014
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Turn your vocals up,pick better beats that accentuate your delivery better, create the beat AFTER the vocals are laid so they mesh better

 

and final feedback: Your mother is a whore, but that has nothing to do with your music 

September 9, 2014
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I understand that, maybe feedback was a bad word to use critique might have been better, I don't want anyone to tell me what exactly to go for thats not what I was looking for just area's needing work like if someone said vocals are too low, beats are too loud, and effects are over bearing then I'd know to focus on those things and work on getting the track cleaner. I was also just curious if many people liked the style not necessarily changing it because like you said that wouldn't make it our own was just wondering how people felt on it. Chris those are all things a lot of people have been saying so I'm gonna work on that, as far as my mother though thats outta my hands sad to know she went that route haha

September 9, 2014
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Shes a nice woman though, she was very gentle and a considerate lover, she held me afterwards which is really nice and even went ATM which speaks volumes about her character

September 10, 2014
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I think asking for feedback is a great way to improve on anything you do, even if it is sometimes a little unrealistic to expect constructive criticism from the internet. But jdubbla87 sounds like he is actually interested in what listeners think of his music, and I respect that.

As mentioned, I think there are definitely some positives, but of course improvement can always be made to any craft. Like some people have mentioned, maybe finding your own voice through making the subject matter a little more unique, etc.

Bottom line, making tunes if fun, and everyone who want to exercise their right to do it, should! Keep on rocking in the free world.

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