the_patriot_smack said
leagues above any of The Warlock's thousand-plus turds he released upon these forums.  

please quote one line that you liked from his song.. I'd love to see what you rate...

mentioning an "r van" on your 1st track is crazy work.. "Never-thrive" to rap about the weird shit that Boondox had..

I don't claim to be any kind of MC or musician. Made for fun because a guy at work was making puppy dog eyes at a girl who is a confirmed lesbian, so I had to poke fun at him 

thread said
Chaos ain't scarce and some pay to believe in

Flux-junkie escape plans, fake sleep, and disease

Bitch, muzzle that fame whore fore I turn it to stone

Punch through life's debris or you can face death alone

You know a lot, yeah you do

Fuckin good luck with that

As time's scorching decryptions put you flat on your back

Liars are liars and it don't matter the kind

Whether villain or hero it's just all the same grind

Be here now if you like or relive days that were humble

We all still have a choice but preaching's dead in this jungle

Some learn to despise their own factory settings

Never getting beyond random chances and guessing

We're never alone, minds are joined beyond senses

Shivering out, mapping secret dimensions

Words come back, reason to love

I hear my own voice when everything's calm  

YouTube Video Aggressive Rap Beat With Hook | "Terrified" | Dark Hip-Hop Instrumental

•SLOW BURN• [WIL E HAZE DISS]

The back story and lyrics are all located here. 👇👇👇https://rawproof.bandcamp.com/track/slow-burn

https://youtu.be/GIOl-Zoc_Vc

INT. KITCHEN - MORNING

We see VIOLENT J, a 10-year-old energetic kid, rummaging through the fridge for breakfast. JUMPSTEADY, his 12 year old brother , walks in.

JUMPSTEADY:
Hey, little man. What's up?

VIOLENT J:
Just trying to find something to eat. I'm so damn hungry!

JUMPSTEADY:
Language, little bro. You know Ma don't like it.

VIOLENT J:
Sorry, Jumpsteady. I forgot. So, what's for breakfast?

JUMPSTEADY:
Eggs and toast, like always.

VIOLENT J:
Come on, man. Can't we have pancakes or something today?

JUMPSTEADY:
I wish, but you know, mama likes to stick to a routine.

VIOLENT J:
Ugh, I hate routines. I'm gonna be a rapper one day and touring the world. No more routine for me.

JUMPSTEADY chuckles.

JUMPSTEADY:
You can be whatever you want to be, little bro. But for now, let's eat those eggs and toast before they get cold.

VIOLENT J:
Fine. But I'm counting down the days until I can have pancakes.

JUMPSTEADY:
(laughs) You do that, little man. You do that.

FADE OUT.

FADE IN:

INT. LIVING ROOM - AFTERNOON

VIOLENT J and JUMPSTEADY are watching TV on the couch. VIOLENT J seems glued to the screen.

JUMPSTEADY:
What are you watching that's got you so hooked?

VIOLENT J:
It's this show about werewolves. They're so cool. I wish I could be one.

JUMPSTEADY:
Ha! You're crazy, little bro.

VIOLENT J:
Why? It'd be awesome. I could turn into a werewolf and scare off all the bullies at school.

JUMPSTEADY:
You don't need to be a werewolf to stand up for yourself. You got me, remember?

VIOLENT J smiles.

VIOLENT J:
Yeah, I do. Thanks, Jumpsteady.

JUMPSTEADY:
Anytime, little man.

FADE OUT.

FADE IN:

INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT

VIOLENT J is laying in bed, staring up at the ceiling. JUMPSTEADY walks in.

JUMPSTEADY:
What's going on? You can't sleep?

VIOLENT J:
Yeah. I keep thinking about werewolves and stuff.

JUMPSTEADY:
(laughs) You gotta let go of that, little bro. It's bedtime.

VIOLENT J:
I know, I know. But I can't help it.

JUMPSTEADY sits on the edge of the bed.

JUMPSTEADY:
Listen, I'll tell you a secret.

VIOLENT J:
What kind of secret?

JUMPSTEADY:
Well, when I was your age, I used to be scared of the dark. But then I realized that I had control over my fear. That's what made me strong.

VIOLENT J:
Really?

JUMPSTEADY:
Really. And you know what else? You gotta remember that you're not alone. We all have fears, but it's how we face them that counts.

VIOLENT J:
Yeah, I guess you're right. Thanks, Jumpsteady.

JUMPSTEADY:
Anytime, little bro. Now get some rest. You got a big day tomorrow.

VIOLENT J:
Okay. Goodnight.

JUMPSTEADY:
Goodnight.

JUMPSTEADY turns off the light and closes the door. VIOLENT J falls asleep with a smile on his face.

FADE OUT.

FADE IN:

INT. KITCHEN - MORNING

VIOLENT J sits at the kitchen table, looking dejected. JUMPSTEADY walks in with a bag of groceries.

JUMPSTEADY:
What's wrong, little man? You look like you lost your best friend.

VIOLENT J:
I did. Sort of. My favorite rap group broke up.

JUMPSTEADY:
Ah, I'm sorry to hear that. Who was it?

VIOLENT J:
Above the Law.

JUMPSTEADY:
Above the Law? I've never heard of them.

VIOLENT J:
That's 'cause you're old.

JUMPSTEADY playfully punches VIOLENT J's shoulder.

JUMPSTEADY:
Watch it, kid. I may be old, but I'll still kick your butt.

VIOLENT J laughs.

VIOLENT J:
So, can we go to the record store and see if they have any cassettes left?

JUMPSTEADY:
Sure, no problem. But let's finish breakfast first.

VIOLENT J:
Okay. You're the best, Jumpsteady!

FADE OUT.

FADE IN:

INT. JUMPSTEADY'S CAR - DAY

VIOLENT J and JUMPSTEADY are driving to the store. Suddenly, a CAR cuts them off and almost causes an accident.

JUMPSTEADY:
What the hell? Who drives like that?

VIOLENT J:
That guy's a maniac!

They pull up at a red light next to the car that cut them off. The driver, a tough-looking man with a scowl on his face, rolls down his window.

DRIVER:
Hey, watch where you're going!

JUMPSTEADY:
Watch where you're going, pal. You almost caused an accident.

DRIVER:
(scoffs) You got a problem?

JUMPSTEADY:
Actually, yeah. You're driving like a maniac, and you need to be more careful.

DRIVER:
You got a big mouth for a little guy. Maybe I should teach you some respect.

The light turns green, and the driver speeds away.

VIOLENT J:
What was that all about?

JUMPSTEADY:
I don't know, little man. But something tells me that guy's trouble.

FADE OUT.

FADE IN:

EXT. RECORD STORE - DAY

VIOLENT J and JUMPSTEADY walk up to the record store. There's a sign on the door that says "CLOSED".

VIOLENT J:
What the heck? Why is it closed?

JUMPSTEADY:
Looks like they're closed for inventory. We'll have to come back another day.

VIOLENT J:
This sucks. I really wanted to get that cassette. 

JUMPSTEADY:
Hey, don't worry about it. We'll come back soon. In the meantime, why don't we go to the park and toss a ball around?

VIOLENT J:
Really?

JUMPSTEADY:
Sure. It'll be fun.

FADE OUT.

FADE IN:

EXT. PARK - DAY

VIOLENT J and JUMPSTEADY are playing catch with a baseball.

VIOLENT J:
This is awesome! I haven't played catch in forever.

JUMPSTEADY:
(laughs) I know. It's nice to do something different for a change.

VIOLENT J:
Definitely. Hey, Jumpsteady, do you think I could ever be a musician like the guys in Above the Law?

JUMPSTEADY:
Absolutely. You're a talented kid, and you've got a lot of passion. All you need is practice and dedication.

VIOLENT J smiles.

VIOLENT J:
Thanks for believing in me, Jumpsteady.

JUMPSTEADY:
Anytime, little bro.

FADE OUT.

FADE IN:

INT. BRUCE HOUSE - NIGHT

VIOLENT J is doing his homework at the kitchen table when he hears a noise outside. He looks out the window and sees the same car from earlier parked across the street. He watches as the driver gets out and walks towards the house.

VIOLENT J:
Jumpsteady, someone's coming!

JUMPSTEADY rushes to the window and sees the driver approaching.

JUMPSTEADY:
Stay here, little bro.

JUMPSTEADY goes outside to confront the driver. The driver pulls out a baseball bat.

DRIVER:
You got a big mouth earlier, tough guy. Let's see if you can back it up.

They start fighting, and the driver gets the upper hand. VIOLENT J comes outside to see what's going on and sees his brother getting beaten up.

VIOLENT J:
Leave him alone!

VIOLENT J charges the driver and knocks him down with a flying tackle. The driver gets back up and starts swinging the bat at VIOLENT J, but he dodges and punches the driver in the face, knocking him out.

JUMPSTEADY:
(limping) You okay, little bro?

VIOLENT J:
Yeah, I'm fine. Are you okay?

JUMPSTEADY:
Yeah, I'll be all right. Thanks for coming to my rescue.

VIOLENT J:
No problem. That guy was a complete maniac.

JUMPSTEADY:
Yeah, he was. But let's not worry about him anymore. Let's go inside and get you some ice cream.

VIOLENT J:
Okay!

They go inside, and VIOLENT J can't help but feel a little bit proud of himself for standing up to the villain.

FADE OUT.

FADE IN:

EXT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT

VIOLENT J and JUMPSTEADY are walking through the dark and creepy warehouse, looking for the villain who had attacked them earlier.

JUMPSTEADY:
Are you sure you want to do this, little man? We can call the police and let them handle it.

VIOLENT J:
No way, Jumpsteady. We have to face this guy ourselves.

JUMPSTEADY:
All right, but be careful. We don't know what we're getting into here.

They hear a noise and turn the corner to see the villain standing there, waiting for them.

VIOLENT J:
It's him!

Villain:
(laughing) So, you decided to come face me yourself, eh?

JUMPSTEADY:
We're not afraid of you, punk.

Villain:
We'll see about that.

They start fighting, and the villain seems to have the upper hand. He's bigger and stronger than both of them, and they're struggling to keep up.

VIOLENT J:
We have to do something, Jumpsteady. We can't keep taking hits like this.

JUMPSTEADY:
I know. I have an idea. Follow my lead.

JUMPSTEADY stands in front of the villain and pretends to be hurt.

JUMPSTEADY:
I can't go on. You win.

Villain:
(laughing) That's right, I do. Now get out of my sight.

As the villain turns to leave, VIOLENT J charges him and tackles him from behind. They both fall to the ground, and VIOLENT J quickly stands up and, with one swift punch, knocks the villain out for good.

VIOLENT J:
We did it, Jumpsteady! We beat him!

JUMPSTEADY:
Yeah, we did. And I couldn't be more proud of you, little bro.

They both stand there, taking in the moment, until they hear police sirens in the distance.

JUMPSTEADY:
Come on, let's get out of here before the cops get here.

FADE OUT.

FADE IN:

INT. BRUCE HOUSE - DAY

VIOLENT J is sitting on the couch, looking at a newspaper article about their showdown with the villain.

VIOLENT J:
Can you believe it, Jumpsteady? We made the front page!

JUMPSTEADY:
(laughs) I guess we did. But let's not let it go to our heads, little bro. We're just glad it's over and we're safe. Now let's get working on those rhymes and beats!

VIOLENT J:
You're right, Jumpsteady. I'm just happy we'll do it all together.

JUMPSTEADY:
Me too, little bro. Me too.

FADE OUT.

THE END.

FADE IN:

INT. SVU SQUAD ROOM - DAY

Detective ROLLINS is at her desk, looking through a case file when Detective CARISI enters the room.

CARISI: (excitedly) Rollins, you won't believe it! We just got a hit on the DNA sample from that hatchet case.

ROLLINS: (surprised) Really? I thought we hit a dead end on that one.

CARISI: (nodding) We did, until the techs ran it through a new database. They found a match.

Rollins stands up, ready to go.

ROLLINS: Let's go bring this guy in.

As they exit the squad room, the camera lingers on Rollins' determined expression.

OPENING CREDITS

FADE IN:

INT. SVU INTERROGATION ROOM - DAY

Detective ROLLINS sits at the table, flipping through a folder, as VIOLENT J, a tattooed and heavily built man with a menacing vibe, is led into the room by two uniformed officers. He sits nervously across from Rollins.

ROLLINS: Mr. J, we're here to talk about the assault that took place at the concert in Central Park last night.

VIOLENT J: (nervously) I don't know anything about that.

ROLLINS: Witnesses say they saw you in a heated exchange with the victim, and that you were the last one to be seen with her before she was found unconscious.

VIOLENT J: (defensive) Look, we may have had words, but I didn't touch her. I swear.

ROLLINS: We have surveillance footage of you leaving the scene with blood on your clothes.

VIOLENT J: (angry) I was pushing my way through the crowd, someone probably spilled beer on me.

Rollins shakes her head and leans forward, studying him.

ROLLINS: Mr. J, we know what you're associated with. Your lyrics, your image, your fans...they all portray a violent and aggressive persona.

VIOLENT J: (shifting uncomfortably) That's just entertainment, it's not real life.

ROLLINS: (firmly) Entertainment or not, someone is in critical condition because of what happened last night. We need to find out the truth.

VIOLENT J: (growing frustrated) I'm telling you the truth! I didn't do it!

ROLLINS: (leaning back in her chair) Then who did?

VIOLENT J: (pausing, then sighing heavily) I don't know. It was chaos, people were fighting, there were too many variables. But I swear...I didn't touch her.

Rollins studies him for a moment longer before standing up.

ROLLINS: (firmly) We'll have to continue this interview at another time. Take him to holding.

The officers lead Violent J out of the room as Rollins makes her way to Captain Benson's office.

ROLLINS: (walking in) Captain, we need to search Violent J's property and bring him in again for further questioning.

BENSON: (nodding) Agreed. Let's make sure we do this by the book, though. No slip-ups.

Rollins nods sternly and exits.

FADE OUT

INT. SVU INTERROGATION ROOM - LATER

Violent J is brought back into the room by the same officers, looking more agitated than before. Detective Carisi is now present and takes a seat across from him.

CARISI: You know, Mr. J, you don't seem too concerned about what happened to the victim.

VIOLENT J: (defensive) Of course, I'm concerned! Why do you think I'm here?

CARISI: Because we have reason to believe that you're more involved than you're letting on.

VIOLENT J: (frustrated) I already told you I didn't do it!

CARISI: Then why did we find a hatchet that matches the victim's injuries in your vehicle?

Violent J's eyes widen in surprise.

VIOLENT J: (stuttering) That's not mine! I don't know how it got there!

CARISI: (leaning in) Maybe you had a change of heart and you were planning on turning yourself in, is that it?

VIOLENT J: (defeated) I don't know...I panicked, okay? I didn't want the blame to fall on me.

CARISI: (skeptical) So you just happened to pick up a weapon that matches the injuries of the victim?

VIOLENT J: (avoiding eye contact) It was self-defense. She came at me first.

CARISI: (leaning back) We can't just take your word for it. We'll need a full confession and cooperation if you want any chance of reducing your charges.

Violent J hesitates, looking defeated.

VIOLENT J: (sighing) I'll tell you what happened.

Rollins and Benson enter the room quietly, taking their spots behind Carisi.

VIOLENT J (CONT'D): (shakily) We got into an argument, and things got heated. I didn't like what she was saying about me, about my music. I lost my temper. We got into a scuffle and I hit her with the hatchet. I didn't realize how bad it was until I saw her on the ground, bleeding.

The room falls silent as Violent J finishes his confession.

ROLLINS: (softly) Thank you for being honest with us, Mr. J.

Violent J looks up at her, looking more vulnerable than before.

BENSON: (firmly) You're under arrest and will be charged with assault in the first degree.

The officers stand up to take him into custody again.

VIOLENT J: (resigned) I understand.

The officers lead him out of the room as Rollins, Carisi, and Benson huddle together to discuss their next steps.

FADE OUT

INT. SVU INTERROGATION ROOM - LATER

Rollins, Carisi, and Benson are sitting in the room when a distraught woman enters, looking for answers.

WOMAN: (frantic) I heard my daughter was involved in an assault last night. Is she okay?

BENSON: (nodding) Ma'am, your daughter was the victim. She's in critical condition at the hospital.

The woman breaks down in tears as the detectives try to comfort her.

ROLLINS: (kindly) We understand this is difficult for you, but we need to ask you a few questions about what happened.

The woman nods and begins to compose herself.

WOMAN: (tearfully) My daughter... she's a huge fan of ICP. She wanted to meet him so badly at the concert. They talked for a bit, but then something happened and they started arguing. I was trying to separate them, but everything just got out of hand.

CARISI: (nodding) Do you remember anything specific that they were arguing about?

WOMAN: (pausing) I don't know...it was something about his lyrics being too violent.I didn't really understand it.

BENSON: (nodding) We'll look into it further. Thank you for your cooperation.

The woman nods and exits the room as the detectives continue to discuss the case.

ROLLINS: (thoughtfully) This could be a breakthrough. Maybe we can find previous instances of Violent J's violent behavior related to his music.

CARISI: (nodding) Good idea. Let's get started.

BENSON: (firmly) And meanwhile, make sure we have a tight case against him. I don't want this slipping through our fingers.

The detectives nod in agreement and exit the room, ready to tackle the case.

FADE OUT

The New York County Courthouse
60 Centre Street
Monday, May 4th

INT. COURTHOUSE - DAY

Violent J is led into the courtroom in handcuffs, looking nervous and defeated. The judge enters and takes his seat.

JUDGE: Mr. J, you have been charged with assault in the first degree. How do you plead?

VIOLENT J: (low voice) Guilty, your honor.

The judge nods and looks down at his notes.

JUDGE: I want to emphasize the severity of this crime and the impact it has had on the victim and their family.

The victim's family is present in the courtroom, looking somber and emotional.

JUDGE (CONT'D): I hope that this sentence will serve as a reminder that violence is not the answer, no matter what your personal beliefs or artistic expression.

The judge bangs his gavel and the court adjourns as Violent J is taken back into custody. The victim's family approaches Rollins, Carisi, and Benson, thanking them for their work on the case.

FAMILY MEMBER: (tearfully) We just want justice for our daughter, and to prevent anything like this from happening again.

ROLLINS: (kindly) We understand. We'll be working closely with the court to ensure that justice is served.

The family members nod, looking grateful, as the detectives exit the courtroom.

St. Catherine's Hospital
414 Third Avenue
Tuesday, May 5th

INT. HOSPITAL ROOM - DAY

The victim of Violent J's assault is lying in a hospital bed, looking pale and weak. Benson enters the room, carrying a bouquet of flowers.

BENSON: (kindly) How are you feeling?

VICTIM: (weakly) Better, thank you.

BENSON: (nodding) I wanted to let you know that we got a confession from Violent J. He's going to be behind bars for a while.

The victim nods, looking relieved.

VICTIM: (whispering) I'm just glad it's over.

BENSON: (kindly) Me too. We're going to make sure he's held accountable for his actions.

Suddenly, there's a commotion outside the door, and Benson goes to investigate. Carisi and Rollins enter the room, looking alarmed.

ROLLINS: (urgent) Benson, we just got a call. Violent J has been found dead in his cell.

Benson looks shocked, and the victim starts to whimper in fear.

VICTIM: (terrified) What does this mean? Is it over?

CARISI: (uneasily) We don't know yet.

FADE OUT

Manhattan Detention Complex
125 White Street

INT. JAIL CELL - LATER

Carisi and Rollins are investigating Violent J's cell, looking for any signs of foul play. As they search the room, they notice a strange, eerie feeling in the air. Suddenly, they hear a faint whispering coming from the corner, and they cautiously approach.

ROLLINS: (nervously) Carisi, do you hear that?

CARISI: (alert) Yeah...what the hell is that?

As they get closer, they see a faint apparition of Violent J's face, contorted in agony. The whispering grows louder, and the detectives reel in horror.

CARISI: (terrified) We need to get out of here.

ROLLINS: (nodding) Agreed.

As they start to leave the cell, they hear a loud scream coming from behind them. They turn around, but there's nothing there.

FADE TO BLACK

EXECUTIVE PRODUCER DICK WOLF

CLOSING CREDITS

i dropped this track called DARKNESS about a week ago, a story of a set of demonic nightmares (fun fact, parts of this song are true, real nightmares ive had)

if yall like it, and wanna throw down in the studio, ill work with almost about anyone. 

Heres a track was invited onto that features Lex The Hex Master, and Komatose! 

enjoy!