Faygoluvers - Topic: My First Song https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/ Simple:Press Version 5.7.5.3 TurnaFraze on My First Song https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174557 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174557 Here is the beat as it stands. Needs some mixing done.

]]> Mon, 31 Oct 2016 15:56:49 -0500 TurnaFraze on My First Song https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174554 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174554 I have done several versions over the years. But yea, the final draft is comimg

]]> Mon, 31 Oct 2016 14:59:43 -0500 Chevy2Dope on My First Song https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174551 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174551

TurnaFraze said
The studio was ran by a couple alternative rockers in California. I had been tweaking that song for 5 years. They told me the structure was off and explained song structure to me. I the rewrote it, added another verse, changed a lot of what I had. I am almost done with the beat I will be using for it then I will be recording it again.   

Well they weren't wrong about the structure thing as I had thought the same. But I'm looking forward to hearing the reworked version, should be cool man!

]]> Mon, 31 Oct 2016 13:56:31 -0500 TurnaFraze on My First Song https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174548 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174548 The studio was ran by a couple alternative rockers in California. I had been tweaking that song for 5 years. They told me the structure was off and explained song structure to me. I the rewrote it, added another verse, changed a lot of what I had. I am almost done with the beat I will be using for it then I will be recording it again. 

]]> Mon, 31 Oct 2016 13:31:08 -0500 djscrubb on My First Song https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174542 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174542

Chevy2Dope said

Cool man. yeah I thought there were some good things about the song, although seemed slightly unfinished like it needed more of a verse/chorus structure instead of just kind of ending. 

Also, thought I'd share this here. My wife and I record music sometimes together (I do the instrumentals, she does the vocals) and we started making annual Halloween singles last year. We just put out our 2nd one you can stream or download HERE. It's not rap  

@chevy2dope Damn bro, your wife KILLS it!  Very cool track.  Luv that guitar riff around the 2 minute mark!

I completely agree with scruffy, for it being your first track it dominates my 1st track!  Mine was recorded on a 4 track tape cassette recorder over a Puff Daddy instrumental in '98 with stolen lyrics from Sucka MC's.

]]> Mon, 31 Oct 2016 12:41:05 -0500 scruffy on My First Song https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174541 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174541 lot better than my first song. 

'studio' run by anybody in particular? 

]]> Mon, 31 Oct 2016 12:29:36 -0500 Chevy2Dope on My First Song https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174535 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174535

TurnaFraze said
Hey you're right. Never even thought about it. No I didn't make the beat, and the song has undergone massive transformation since this recording. The guys running the "studio" sucked at their jobs. But they told me before I went in that they don't usually do rap.  

Cool man. yeah I thought there were some good things about the song, although seemed slightly unfinished like it needed more of a verse/chorus structure instead of just kind of ending. 

Also, thought I'd share this here. My wife and I record music sometimes together (I do the instrumentals, she does the vocals) and we started making annual Halloween singles last year. We just put out our 2nd one you can stream or download HERE. It's not rap

]]> Mon, 31 Oct 2016 09:08:47 -0500 TurnaFraze on My First Song https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174532 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174532 Hey you're right. Never even thought about it. No I didn't make the beat, and the song has undergone massive transformation since this recording. The guys running the "studio" sucked at their jobs. But they told me before I went in that they don't usually do rap.

]]> Mon, 31 Oct 2016 08:55:26 -0500 Chevy2Dope on My First Song https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174531 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174531 Sounds good man, I dug it. Did you make the beat? I noticed you used the "dignity is tossed" line from "Under The Moon". 

]]> Mon, 31 Oct 2016 08:31:26 -0500 TurnaFraze on My First Song https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174527 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/my-first-song/#p174527 Just wanted to show this gem off. This is my first song I ever wrote and/or recoded. I spent $12/hour to record this back in 2011.

http://cl.ly/BQsz

 

Sorry it's no SoundCloud link but.....

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