Faygoluvers - Topic: Juggalos: Give me some feedback on my new song. Lyrics included. It's one of my darkest works. https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/ Simple:Press Version 5.7.5.3 Reʞluse on Juggalos: Give me some feedback on my new song. Lyrics included. It's one of my darkest works. https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/page-2/#p152667 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/page-2/#p152667  hook was ok

flow was decent, emotion really could have used work tho, beat is ok

i'd say try to get on point more with the flow ..as i said it was decent but at points it was off alot

and the rhymes could use work cuz there was a few parts where u didnt finish/complete the rhyme 

 

overall decent

]]> Sun, 21 Feb 2016 14:21:32 -0600 bayAreaShaman on Juggalos: Give me some feedback on my new song. Lyrics included. It's one of my darkest works. https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/page-2/#p146415 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/page-2/#p146415 Hahhaha man u guys are shady.....

It sounds like ur just getting started. I can see what u mean by dark. It was. 

I dont give a fuck if u call urself a white boy commi g from a brown man. I dont like the fact that people gotta put that "boy" in there. I guess cuz "white man" allways has a "the" before it and that makes people run and yell.

Grills are cool. They just talking shit cuz they would look ridiculous if they they hadem on. I think theyre cool. Then again i grew up in the bay man everyone had one. Its probably like growing up in the south it feels like they probably got alot of that going on down there....not everyone can pull it off. I got crazy fucken simpson madonna teeth so its out of the question... a boy could dream tho...

These guys know what they're ralking about when it comes to music production homie.

Just plz plz plz rap about something other than being high.....or make it more obscure. That to me just says "oh um what do i say...AHHHH HELL YEAH IM HIGH NIKKUH!

]]> Fri, 20 Nov 2015 17:29:44 -0600 OCJ_Brendan on Juggalos: Give me some feedback on my new song. Lyrics included. It's one of my darkest works. https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/page-2/#p146405 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/page-2/#p146405 HEY GUYS LOOK WHAT I GOT

 

*Looks at the above post*

 

*Puts away gold teeth he was so proud of*

 

Nevermind....

]]> Fri, 20 Nov 2015 11:16:09 -0600 Ridik Rage on Juggalos: Give me some feedback on my new song. Lyrics included. It's one of my darkest works. https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p145951 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p145951 Ah yes i remember Real Juggalos! I used to have a Christmas shirt of them with a clown Santa ripping Eminems head off and putting it in a bag!

Yes Sean, he looks like a cunt I must admit, who the fuck wants gold teeth?

]]> Fri, 13 Nov 2015 10:07:40 -0600 Sean Law on Juggalos: Give me some feedback on my new song. Lyrics included. It's one of my darkest works. https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p145948 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p145948 but back on topic, I hate this guys voice. and whats up with the teeth.  is that a grill in his mouth, or a payday?

]]> Fri, 13 Nov 2015 08:21:38 -0600 Sean Law on Juggalos: Give me some feedback on my new song. Lyrics included. It's one of my darkest works. https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p145947 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p145947 along with Milenko500. I think they were based in Glen Burnie MD, where I was living at the time.

]]> Fri, 13 Nov 2015 08:19:18 -0600 djscrubb on Juggalos: Give me some feedback on my new song. Lyrics included. It's one of my darkest works. https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p145946 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p145946 Naw man, this is like YEARS ago.  Before this site even had this forum, at the bottom of each site update there used to be a "Comments" section and that's were everyone logged in and bitched at each other and talked about whatever.  I just remember this dude from back then being called Fire Queef for some reason!  haha  God that's like 5-6 years ago i guess.  There's quite a few people that have been coming to this site since the inception.  I know I've personally been coming here since '01 I guess....but back then it was Real Juggalos dot com running the web game, but when Faygoluvers really got poppin they just crushed the game and never looked back!  lil history for ya...

]]> Fri, 13 Nov 2015 07:45:16 -0600 Ridik Rage on Juggalos: Give me some feedback on my new song. Lyrics included. It's one of my darkest works. https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p145944 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p145944 Fuck I didnt check how old the thread was ha ha.

Fire Queef lol. You opened yourself up to that one bud.

]]> Fri, 13 Nov 2015 07:29:44 -0600 djscrubb on Juggalos: Give me some feedback on my new song. Lyrics included. It's one of my darkest works. https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p145938 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p145938 Remember back in the day when the forum used to be in the comment section after every post?  on the old site, I remember everyone calling this dude Fire Queef....some shit like that...

]]> Fri, 13 Nov 2015 06:47:05 -0600 Novocaine, The Blue Collar King on Juggalos: Give me some feedback on my new song. Lyrics included. It's one of my darkest works. https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p145875 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p145875 oh god i forgot about this song.

why would you do this to me ridik.

now i have to go clean out my ears.

]]> Thu, 12 Nov 2015 16:50:10 -0600 Ridik Rage on Juggalos: Give me some feedback on my new song. Lyrics included. It's one of my darkest works. https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p145853 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p145853 A decent track, you cunt.???

 

Id id give it a 5/10 I suppose. It's not the worst or best. Go back and rework the offbeat parts and yes, change "white boy" imo. Most black dudes accept white rappers now(perhaps grudgingly at times). It's not really a talking point. Mixing in the vocals sounded pretty good. Keep working Bro!

]]> Thu, 12 Nov 2015 13:36:47 -0600 Novocaine, The Blue Collar King on Juggalos: Give me some feedback on my new song. Lyrics included. It's one of my darkest works. https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p136132 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p136132 @djscrubb just remember homie, when your in perth you hit me up. ill crank up the bbq and make you some good old fashioned aussie barbeque and cheap lager.

]]> Wed, 01 Jul 2015 11:35:07 -0500 djscrubb on Juggalos: Give me some feedback on my new song. Lyrics included. It's one of my darkest works. https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p136125 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p136125 @novocaine haha that's dope man!  I was in the Air Force and traveled all over the world and luv hearing peoples different cultures/food and slang!  

Oh and that track, I mean....I don't wanna bash you my man, its just extremely amateur.  You'll get better dude, like Novo said stack those vox homie definitely on the chorus son.  Pan them shits out left to right, stack STACK STACK!!!  Little bit of reverb, little bit of on-time delays ect ect.....

]]> Wed, 01 Jul 2015 08:23:42 -0500 Novocaine, The Blue Collar King on Juggalos: Give me some feedback on my new song. Lyrics included. It's one of my darkest works. https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p136018 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p136018

djscrubb said
That's right! haha youtube that shit son.  Heaps is a new word in my ever growing vocabulary!

start saying the following words and your well on your way to becoming an honorary aussie.

G'day

mate (people you dont know or arent overly fond of)

cunt (your friends. example: Hey cunt, what you doing?)

yeah nah (example: yeah nah we went to the bush doof on satty, was fucking sick cunt)

sick is also acceptable. in a positive manner (that was fucking sick cunt, do it again)

and if you find yourself around alot of kiwis (islanders, mauldi, cookies etc, its all 2 sides of the same coin) bro and chur are also good. and if you come to perth our kiwi population is like 40%

 

also, swear ALOT. like alot alot. 

]]> Tue, 30 Jun 2015 11:00:31 -0500 djscrubb on Juggalos: Give me some feedback on my new song. Lyrics included. It's one of my darkest works. https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p136006 Wicked Rappers Delight https://www.faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/wicked-rappers-delight/juggalos-give-me-some-feedback-on-my-new-song-lyrics-included-its-one-of-my-darkest-works/#p136006 That's right! haha youtube that shit son.  Heaps is a new word in my ever growing vocabulary!

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