i dont/wont vote on my battle (although i feel i won) haha

i gotta read through the dutch vs jerz exchange before i can cast a vote on that (which i will)

thus far i can only vote on lucem vs jerz.. if it had ended when we were discussing the "one punchline" thing i wouldve voted for lucem but since yall kept goin i gotta give the W to jerz..

PaulDutchy420 said 

A 12 gauge shotty with the worst of intensions

Tape and rope to tie u in and a knife to cut the tension

I got a 357 for a mind, my thoughts are magazine fed every time i rhyme when I'm rapping

My mouth ejects shells cuz my tongue is double action

Spitting fully automatic paragraphs directly at ya

When I talk I'm breaking the law

Had to file the serial numbers off of my jaw

Lyrical nutcase I sleep in a gun case

Fuck u fuck face I'm Teflon coated u just mase

Two guys walk into a bar looking to fuck some chicks
The dudes left when fag man tried to suck their dicks

Two fags walk into a bar to fuck some assholes
And fucked fag man's mouth cause that's where the crap flows

Warlock went to the bar because Esham never gave up the dick
He met fag man and then made em' his bitch

Like I said Hip hop is my culture so nows who's the wanksta?/

And I don't wear face paint so please don't get it twisted/

And stop with your wack ass bars because right now you're getting lifted/

Thrown from the highest balcony still screamin' "He ain't shit/

Just change your fuckin panties cause I think your tampon just leaked bitch/

And you're exactly right it doesn't matter where we're from/

What matters is that you're a faggot who drinks piss and licks cum/

and I bet if I offered you shit from ass you'd take some/

So punk get to steppin cause this whole forum knows that I've won/

I don't claim to be hard but you claim to be a god/

and if you are then I bet you're why the romans seem odd/

Cause in history if you can read then you will see some gay shit/

If anything you're the god of hedonisim promoting guys to get on every and each dick/

You're bars remind of an alcoholic spiraling out of control/

Who would suck the bartenders dick for one last shot of patron/

Get into a car accident and offer up more dome/

to the arresting officer at the office to give you a ride home/

PaulDutchy420 said 

haha i cant tell if youre being sarcastic but jerz claimed lucem only had one punch in his.. i honestly havent fully read one of your verses.. i stop halfway through cuz they sound like some random gangtsa rap lyrics you wrote for a song & not for your opponent basically a punchline generally has a simile or word association built into the line or is just a hard hitting line based on relevance.. kinda like the 2 in jerz's most recent verse

FatMan Jersey said
You wanna know what's generic Lucem/

A juggalo who spits a bunch of satanist shit/

And you wanna talk about wack lines and bars/

Calling me and Warlock "fuck guys" and you call that hard?/

You think you got better punch lines then me/

let me remind that not one hot artist has come out of SLC/

Meanwhile back in my state/

other dudes are getting irate/

Cause Budden, Outsidaz, and Red been fresh since before myspace/

Mix in the Sugarhill gang and Queen La-tif-ah/

And understand when I read your rhymes I go la-di-da/

I live in this history Hip hop is my cult-ure/

You only live it cause you heard the first 6 jok-ers/

So go ahead call me a wanksta I heard what ya said/

But I was rocking to 50 before you even knew what wanksta meant!/

So I want you to understand this cause you lost this you're rhymes are horrible/

Your lungs are black from the shit you spit your rhymes are deplorable/

This is the hip hop nation and dude I'm deporting you!/

Dwammm that was ill u went hard on that one