pretty decent beat, nice to see you at work.  

but it would take a lot of careful writing indeed, to incorporate all those 'bullshits' into the lyrics;  and if you didnt, it would be distracting as fuck.  

i am assuming, naturally, that you are already aware, and intended that to be a temp, pending further use.  

Well fuck this site, it isn't underground! I am underground! I am so underground that I sleep with fossils! I'm further underground than my brother is! I'm the underground messiah!

I'm never coming back to this site again!!!!

They read the title, think "oooh, this might be dope!" and then when you click the link to listen you think "BULLSHIT!"

I can't record but it took me 2 hours to make this beat!!!

Just insert some dope verses that I kill and some great punchlines then I have officially won!

Or you do it and I have won?

At least I hope he hasn't been doing it long...

    Whatever. Internets a dangerous place to lose your temper as i found out. It was childish, but i said my words in the song, That's the end of it for me, unless he wants a second shot.

In all honesty I'm gonna say mehhh. It had so much potential it was almost ok but there was a lot of times when ur shit didn't rhyme when you actually tried. Plus why you so salty that nobody liked your shit? You wanted an opinion then say we're hatin faggots for not liking your music. You're really just not that good I'm sorry man,  not trying to hurt your feelings either. Go listen to someone like ScHoolboyQ then listen to yourself and then compare quality,  including style, delivery, rhyming, mastering, and beats.