Guest said
Kool Keith maintains a good balance of rhyming and non-rhyming bars, in my opinion.

I can't stand when people only go for rhyming the end of the word, or always just basic single syllables. That style is caveman. I remember when I first heard MCs rhyming the vowel sounds, as opposed to the technical rhymes for the word. I realized that was usually enough, given the delivery was tight. That's when shit gets cracked open lyrically, for me at least. This stuff here, this is just crap.

although 99% of my shit is multi-syllabics i really dont care if others use it or not.. im just annoyed when people try to claim cats who rhyme single syllables are lyricist.. complexity & simplicity have their places & can co-exist..

I can't stand when people only go for rhyming the end of the word, or always just basic single syllables. That style is caveman. I remember when I first heard MCs rhyming the vowel sounds, as opposed to the technical rhymes for the word. I realized that was usually enough, given the delivery was tight. That's when shit gets cracked open lyrically, for me at least. This stuff here, this is just crap.

LTB said
Again, the end of every single bar doesnt have to be a ryhme. It's very simplistic and seems like you try to hard to rhyme. Not as cringe worthy as the last one Though. Do more rhymes like quietly-cry for me. Those are good. But room, doom, boom, etc. just come off lame.

yeah i was thinkin about rthe boom part and thought that part was kinda stale. But i pretty much love the rest. I couled give a fuck less about the haters. Also i like when shit rhymes alot.

JabroniKilla said
I like my dog
I like my pogs
fav icp song the smog
I can rap
Im on the map
Trees have sap
I gotta crap
Just ate time for a nap
Cus i was sleepy
Had a scary dreamy
I was suckerpunched by lil.sneezy
Then he took my style
Last night was wild
Made out wit kyle
Then we adopted child
I only rap bout demons
Being straight.makes.me start heavin
Im parched where da semen
So many responses im creamin

Best shit i ever read. jabroni is mt biggest fan!

Demented Smoka said

Guest said
It's not a rap unless you spit it. This is mere rhyme writing. Poetry, if you want to be generous... perhaps more accurately defined as simple mother gooseries. Thanks for sharing.

What if he said verse? Would it be correct then or does that still has to be spoken?

He should know what I mean and not try to be too technical. 

Guest said
It's not a rap unless you spit it. This is mere rhyme writing. Poetry, if you want to be generous... perhaps more accurately defined as simple mother gooseries. Thanks for sharing.

What if he said verse? Would it be correct then or does that still has to be spoken?

Chuklz said

Guest said
It's not a rap unless you spit it. This is mere rhyme writing. Poetry, if you want to be generous... perhaps more accurately defined as simple mother gooseries. Thanks for sharing.

no its a rap. dont tell me what my shit is and isnt.

a damn okay rap at that

Guest said
It's not a rap unless you spit it. This is mere rhyme writing. Poetry, if you want to be generous... perhaps more accurately defined as simple mother gooseries. Thanks for sharing.

no its a rap. dont tell me what my shit is and isnt.

For this one I could give a fuck less what you think. Everyone has their dark times. I express my pent up darkness through my rhymes. So yeah.