im not going to... i done heard the beef between you and sick thts wat made me come to this site like i said im just tryin to get this out there and promote if people dont like it thats their own opinion and they can say what they want its not gonna hurt me at all.... its not like imma go and make a diss track about how butt hurt i am that people dont like it i mean that is immature

well ya at least it will be honest feedback like i said it can be negative... hell im even expecting it i just wanna know what people think if they dont like it at least i know thats how people feel about it and i can work on it to make it better but you never know till you do and i have nothing to lose and everything to gain

chieflocc said
Seriously though. You're terrible, not trying to be a dick but that was just really bad I don't see ANYONE enjoying that

what you think was bad about it..... cuz im not goin to stop writin and preformin so shit u got some advice to help me let me know... unless ur just being a troll

scruffy said
yeah, its buttery.  

  

very not good.  

specifics:  

1- youre way too close to the mic.  

2- music benefits greatly from mixing.  its pretty much a requirement.  poor quality is one thing, total lack of production value is another.  

3- delivery is exceedingly weak, you sound like youre trying not to be too loud, lest you wake mom and dad.  

4- one of the fundamental concepts of hiphop is known as 'flow'.  i can see that you need be told this, as you have none.  sorry, but, none at all.  huge lack there.  

5- i dont know what youre talkin about in any of these songs, but they come off like youre just transcribing the [ultra-abridged edition] rhyming dictionary, and cramming in words around it.  

6- yeah, there is more, but the list is harsh enough, for now.  

  

2/10.  you got an extra point for not frontin like we should expect you to be the bomb.  

  

lemme know if theres anything else i can do for ya.  

  

shit im not worried about my feelings like i said thats why i posted it to get better so im not worried about harshness... but i just started doin this and trying to do everyting i can to get better.... as for not tryin to be to loud i really wasnt cuz like i said it was on a gaming headset any louder and it would have been even worse than it already is trust me i tried... as for mixing and all that im tryin to learn as i go...as for my flow when i do music for some reason its never fast enough for me so i try to go faster instead of pacing myself... thank you for all the feed back from everybody and chief im not goin to throw in the towel everything takes time and practice so thats what im going to do.... hopefully my next e.p. there will be a HUGE difference in the quality of not only production but in my lyrics and everything else.... i thank everybody for the feedback hopefully i can learn and get better

chieflocc said
Can't stay on beat. Can't rhyme.  No emotion. Sounds like you're talking to ur homies. How could you even ask if I'm trolling have you not listened to yourself? If you're just doing it for fun then groovy, but no one is gonna be jammin this shit.

i know it was shit i never meant that as you are a troll but this is the internet and trolls are everywhere you look so i appreciate your honesty and the whole emotion... every time i went to put more emotion into it, it sounded more like shit and as for now im doing it cuz i have nothing better to do so why not try to do this