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Juggalos: Give me some feedback on my new song. Lyrics included. It's one of my darkest works.
November 20, 2015
11:16 am
OCJ_Brendan
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HEY GUYS LOOK WHAT I GOT

 

*Looks at the above post*

 

*Puts away gold teeth he was so proud of*

 

Nevermind....

"Somewhere theres a Waffle House thats severely understaffed right now" -OCJ to Scruffy watching a second stage act at the Gathering.

November 20, 2015
5:29 pm
bayAreaShaman
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Hahhaha man u guys are shady.....

It sounds like ur just getting started. I can see what u mean by dark. It was. 

I dont give a fuck if u call urself a white boy commi g from a brown man. I dont like the fact that people gotta put that "boy" in there. I guess cuz "white man" allways has a "the" before it and that makes people run and yell.

Grills are cool. They just talking shit cuz they would look ridiculous if they they hadem on. I think theyre cool. Then again i grew up in the bay man everyone had one. Its probably like growing up in the south it feels like they probably got alot of that going on down there....not everyone can pull it off. I got crazy fucken simpson madonna teeth so its out of the question... a boy could dream tho...

These guys know what they're ralking about when it comes to music production homie.

Just plz plz plz rap about something other than being high.....or make it more obscure. That to me just says "oh um what do i say...AHHHH HELL YEAH IM HIGH NIKKUH!

YOU KNOW THEY AINT NO SUCH THING AS LEFTOVER CRACK!!!- Leftover Crack

February 21, 2016
2:21 pm
Reʞluse
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 hook was ok

flow was decent, emotion really could have used work tho, beat is ok

i'd say try to get on point more with the flow ..as i said it was decent but at points it was off alot

and the rhymes could use work cuz there was a few parts where u didnt finish/complete the rhyme 

 

overall decent

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