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3:49 pm
March 8, 2013
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(UNFINISHED AS ALWAYS)
They sayin chukboy you evil and lethal
Why you talkin shit about these deceased people?
stop stabbing all the faggots in the home depo
Are you some kind of psychotic sociopath?
You claim you're smart as fuck but you can't even do freshman math
My teacher soudin like gandalf the gray YOU SHALL NOT PASS
So I just chill in class passin the gas
The hottie in front of me wearin no panties I stare at her ass
Chuklz are you a sick sexual sadist?
Nah bitch I'm just prick who's always fuckin dateless
I'm spend my weekends in the alleyway killin a bunch of rapists
Everyone sayin I'm annoying as fuck like a bed bug bite
But if they keep talkin shit imma take some lifes
I get irate cuz The airport sees me as a ruthless villain
Just because I'm an Arab I can't just be chillin
They wanna see me die a hundred times like krillan
Yeah yeah I'm an ADD Arab with a bi polar disorder
but everyone thinks I'm a Mexican who just jumped the border
They find out I'm hella mixed so they call me a mutt
But at they end of the day guess who's gonna get cut
Dissected like some frog guts
Mr. D there you go again talking about cutting and stabbing
Haven't you had enough of this nonsensical blabbing
Any more of this shit is what I'm not having
Shrinks are sayin I'm skitzophrenic
Givin me Xanax bars for the panic
But I just pop that shit off like a Russian AK
Sell them on the south side to some homeless junkies
All the pill head bitches love meh
Not
I can't even get props from a crackwhore
they'd prolly wanna be smokin some crack more
All I wanted to do is enter from the back door
Dammit chuklz stop bein so damn vulgar
You'll never get play cuz face it you look like an ogre
Fuck you hoe bitch is what I told her
Then crushed that hoe with a bolder
These skanks wanna talk too much smack
So I put hella weapons right through their rack
Then i Watch em blow like a car in Iraq
Don't even think I'm fuckin frontin either
Ask your girl what up next time you see her
Don't get mad cuz I can't control my actions
If you gettin me pissed you don't wanna see my reaction
Let just say I go hard like an erection and do murder to the upmost perfection
My brain is gone, my brain is gone, say no more my brain is gone
4:01 pm
May 29, 2013
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It's improving.
Blood rains down from an angry sky! My cock rages on! My cock rages on!
4:04 pm
March 8, 2013
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yeah i feel that way too.
I just feel like even though its gettin better it has that everlasting taste of wackness.
I think i need to learn how to stucture my rhymes better
My brain is gone, my brain is gone, say no more my brain is gone
4:17 pm
May 29, 2013
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Im not an expert, and im often told i have poor taste and am too easy to impress. So dont take my advice too much to heart. But at least it doesnt sound like a drunk and pissed dr. seuss wrote it this time.
Blood rains down from an angry sky! My cock rages on! My cock rages on!
4:19 pm
March 8, 2013
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LTB said
Im not an expert, and im often told i have poor taste and am too easy to impress. So dont take my advice too much to heart. But at least it doesnt sound like a drunk and pissed dr. seuss wrote it this time.
lol thats the nicest thing anyones eve said to me
My brain is gone, my brain is gone, say no more my brain is gone
5:31 pm
March 8, 2013
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Chuklz said
LTB said
Im not an expert, and im often told i have poor taste and am too easy to impress. So dont take my advice too much to heart. But at least it doesnt sound like a drunk and pissed dr. seuss wrote it this time.lol thats the nicest thing anyones eve said to me
sarcasm
My brain is gone, my brain is gone, say no more my brain is gone
6:15 pm
March 31, 2012
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Chuklz said
(UNFINISHED AS ALWAYS)They sayin chukboy you evil and lethal
Why you talkin shit about these deceased people?
stop stabbing all the faggots in the home depo
Are you some kind of psychotic sociopath?
You claim you're smart as fuck but you can't even do freshman math
X_X
6:18 pm
March 8, 2013
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The Warlock said
Chuklz said
(UNFINISHED AS ALWAYS)They sayin chukboy you evil and lethal
Why you talkin shit about these deceased people?
stop stabbing all the faggots in the home depo
Are you some kind of psychotic sociopath?
You claim you're smart as fuck but you can't even do freshman math
X_X
is that goo or bad?
My brain is gone, my brain is gone, say no more my brain is gone
6:24 pm
March 31, 2012
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depends on what you were going for.. as in if you wrote that in seriousness or satire..
6:30 pm
March 8, 2013
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The Warlock said
depends on what you were going for.. as in if you wrote that in seriousness or satire..
satire of course. this whole song is a horror/humor
If i were recording this the third person would oof been like a theripist/ other voice
and fuck i just had another panic attack>>>>>>>>>>>
My brain is gone, my brain is gone, say no more my brain is gone
6:50 pm
March 8, 2013
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The Warlock said
depends on what you were going for.. as in if you wrote that in seriousness or satire..
to fresh tho
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10:52 pm
February 9, 2013
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Plz dont feed the duckalos
5:11 pm
August 27, 2012
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Can a mod go to the first post in this thread and change unfinished to shitty so anyone who reads has proper warning before they choose to do so.
"Somewhere theres a Waffle House thats severely understaffed right now" -OCJ to Scruffy watching a second stage act at the Gathering.
5:24 pm
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May 22, 2012
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OCJ_Brendan said
Can a mod go to the first post in this thread and change unfinished to shitty so anyone who reads has proper warning before they choose to do so.
not i. good enough warning in the title.
weighing in... im not gonna comment on the quality of the poem, because i dont really know if its any good, i just kinda skimmed it.
awfully paranoid, arent you?
6:50 pm
April 15, 2013
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D- The way you switch between tenses is one of the more annoying qualities to your want-to-bes. I say one of because there are plenty of things you need to work on before you even think of actually rapping and graduating to full blown poseur. To be honest your lyrics scream low self esteem, I imagine you are using this as a way to feel better about yourself. Plus, your horrible. Other than that it pretty much sucked.
6:57 pm
February 9, 2013
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Your poems should be used to torture the worst criminals in the world they can only read ur poems all day
7:18 pm
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May 22, 2012
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Guest said
D- The way you switch between tenses is one of the more annoying qualities to your want-to-bes. I say one of because there are plenty of things you need to work on before you even think of actually rapping and graduating to full blown poseur. To be honest your lyrics scream low self esteem, I imagine you are using this as a way to feel better about yourself. Plus, your horrible. Other than that it pretty much sucked.
raw, but funny.
awfully paranoid, arent you?
8:16 pm
September 18, 2012
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It doesn't suck as much as some people say it does, it needs work though.
I did like the "shall not pass" line though, regardless of how over used that joke is.
Plus, I'm sorry, but anybody who considers them self to be a hardcore ICP fan has no right to say some of the shit some people say on here.
"I climbed up a tree, guy/I came back down, I don't know why"
Yeah...
Guest said
D- The way you switch between tenses is one of the more annoying qualities to your want-to-bes.
I disagree.
I say one of because there are plenty of things you need to work on before you even think of actually rapping and graduating to full blown poseur.
Just some hater bullshit.
To be honest your lyrics scream low self esteem, I imagine you are using this as a way to feel better about yourself. Plus, your horrible. Other than that it pretty much sucked.
You listen to fucking ICP. Remember that. His shit reminds me of some fucking OG ICP, you're just talking shit.
2:02 pm
March 8, 2013
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I was kinda aiming for that old school clowns sound.
TO ME, this is the shizzle so fuck yall deniers
My brain is gone, my brain is gone, say no more my brain is gone
2:13 pm
August 27, 2012
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Chuklz said
I was kinda aiming for that old school clowns sound.
TO ME, this is the shizzle so fuck yall deniers
^^This gets you props. Not the old school clowns sound, but the confidence part.
"Somewhere theres a Waffle House thats severely understaffed right now" -OCJ to Scruffy watching a second stage act at the Gathering.
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